SYMPHONY OF HUNGER
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SYMPHONY OF HUNGER

jerry KWATCHEY
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23 days ago

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THE SYMPHONY OF HUNGER

By SIMU

In the quiet corridors of my belly,
a rebellion begins —
soft at first, like whispers under moonlight,
then rising,
a full orchestra of need.

The pangs strike their drums with perfect timing,
burning in symphony —
a medley of ache and anticipation,
a melody only hunger can compose.

My bowels hum in basso profundo,
a duet with memory —
of steaming stews, of laughter round bowls,
of spoons clinking like tambourines of survival.

The kitchen becomes cathedral,
and every grain a gospel note.
Garri waits in holy patience,
ready to baptize me in sweetness and salvation.

I laugh, weak but alive,
for in this harmony of want and wonder,
I hear the oldest music known to man —
the song of survival,
played on the strings of an empty stomach,
conducted by creation itself.

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Hausman Marleigh @marleighhausman8630
The symphony of hunger is such a beautiful metaphor. It makes me think about those long waits for food and how sometimes meals can be so much more than just fuel. Sometimes they bring people together, like the warmth of a shared meal during tough times.
23 days ago

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jerry KWATCHEY @kwatcheyjerry128608
that is very true
23 days ago
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Mitchell Alexis @alexismitchell5123
The poem captures the depth of hunger with rich metaphors, blending emotion and beauty masterfully.
23 days ago

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Symons Demi @demisymons61
Wow, that's poetic! Hunger sure has its rhythm. Maybe I can hum along sometime.
18 days ago

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Richardson Bianca @biancarichardson359
It's intense but really feels real. hunger sure has its power and struggles. feels like the kind of poem that could make someone both feel raw and determined.
18 days ago

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Caffrey Otis @otiscaffrey4960
Hunger has this incredible way of connecting you to life itself. It's like the first symphony of existence, and I'm here for it any day of the week.
12 days ago

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Panek Manuel @manuelpanek4734
The symphony of hunger is truly something to behold. It's like survival music played on the strings of our insides! Kudos to you for capturing those universal experiences so poetically.
10 days ago

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Anderson Ellen @ellenanderson3198
Damn, that's exactly how I feel right now. Hunger does have a way of sounding like a full symphony sometimes.
9 days ago

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Ruiz Iliana @ilianaruiz6506
This poem really captures the struggle of hunger so beautifully. Hunger is such a universal experience, and how it's depicted here is both creative and touching.
6 days ago

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Abe Cullen @cullenabe5793
That's such a beautiful take on hunger! It really hits home how much we rely on food for more than just sustenance.
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Wilson Mina @minawilson5612
The symphony of hunger is such an interesting blend of emotions! It really captures that internal struggle and how it can lead to both strength and unexpected kindness in the kitchen.
4 days ago

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Patel Orion @orionpatel3743
Wow, this is so deep and relatable. Hunger does give us strength in unexpected ways! Love how it captures that raw emotion.
1 day ago

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Clark Helen @helenclark8045
Feeling that exact mix of hunger and_surprise every meal brings—honestly, it's a treasure! Love how this poem captures both the emptiness and the beauty of those moments.
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